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I Remember

I remember how she watered my mind Like a tender plant she nurtured my soul My mind bamboozled by her many words You can make it, you can make it No clichés she says metaphors are wise I never hesitate stories I create I unfold like a flower, words break free I blossom and bloom in literature Her voice a mentor to the words I write My pen my closest friend, I hold her dear Many words like the sun shining down on me I bask in the presence of poetry I hear her voice clean and clear in my ear Her praise sits on me like a butterfly Pen to paper becomes an easy task I grow and glow spreading my own petals

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Date: 10/16/2012 1:11:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you today Treisha. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/14/2012 12:02:00 PM
Treisha just wondeful...David
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Treisha Williams
Date: 10/14/2012 12:07:00 PM
thank you
Date: 10/14/2012 11:57:00 AM
Excellent poetry my poet friend. Michael
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Treisha Williams
Date: 10/14/2012 12:07:00 PM
thanks
Date: 10/14/2012 11:52:00 AM
wow Treisha had me glued,love it, you have blossomed,great write
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Treisha Williams
Date: 10/14/2012 12:06:00 PM
Thank you Richard

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