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I Remember

I hold three magic rocks, in my hand Rolling them over and over and over Leaving this reality behind, far behind Where am I? What’s happening to me? What am I doing here? I try to remember, my mind is clouded with a terrible fear. I remember! I was lying in an operating theatre with lights shining down on me Slowly I recalled what had happened. I saw the oncoming tree Headlights blazed and then the darkness. I swerved but couldn’t stop I saw myself lying in the road, and then I saw a traffic cop. The light, the bright dazzling light was blinding me. Wondering in the ether, a restless nomadic spirit free. I moved in a slow and airless motional way Following my instincts I fought to stay The surgeons were trying to save me, I knew this But now I was free from pain and that was bliss I remember! I don’t know how I knew this. I was numb from the shock of it all I floated along the ether I heard the heavens call I was out of body and just a soul, a lost soul without a doubt I wanted to tell the surgeons, I was here but I couldn’t shout Was this the end? Oh no! This can’t be happening to me! Here I am I haven’t gone, I am still here can’t you see! The three magic rocks will save me won’t they? Where are they now I must find Were they just thoughts in a dying dream or a figment of my mind? The light is calling it wants me to go I follow the heavenly glow I am too young to leave this world oh please don’t make me go I remember! My journey isn’t over and I plead with the powers that be You don’t want me to go there yet, you really don’t need me I may not have been an angel but my heart is in the right place You can’t take me away from here; I am part of the human race As I travelled along to my destiny, whatever that may hold I felt myself being dragged along, I can’t die! I am not that old This is the end of my journey; I fear I may have died I don’t know what is in store for me, I really could have cried The light disappeared abruptly; drawn back to my body so Did those magic rocks save me? That I will never know (Entered in Constance La France's contest)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/29/2011 11:07:00 AM
Pamela, I find this so very odd that you wrote of a life ending experience.That I also had the same exprience but did not want to come back.I wanted to stay.I really enjoy your works!They all seem to remind me of myself.Truely unbelieveable.
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Date: 11/25/2009 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations Pamela on your win in Constance's excellent contest >> James,x
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Date: 11/23/2009 1:04:00 PM
Dear Pamela, Congratulations on your win in th contest. What a journey!. Love, Lanie
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Date: 11/23/2009 11:59:00 AM
Very imaginative. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/22/2009 9:11:00 PM
Congrats, Pam, on your winning poem in the Magical Journey contest.. well deserved win... happy to share the stage with u .. blessings ... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/9/2009 6:35:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 11/9/2009 1:08:00 PM
So I am curious, how much of this is a poem vs a true recollection? Well done if a poem and totally introspective if recall.
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