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I Regret Friends Like You

RUNAWAY TRAIN Runaway Train, the only thing running through my mind Got that song stuck in my head after hearing the song. I think I can, -I think I can, but I better not I think I can, -I think I can I'll give it my best shot A runaway train I saw in the movie War of the Worlds" with Tom Cruise A runaway train up in flames a Runaway train, dark secrets like coal a Runaway train, derailed at the end a Runaway train, my final Destination a Runaway train, got side tracked a Runaway train when my mother left Runaway train, it was all bull ---- I regret the day you I met you:-) runaway train will never take my pain runaway train a life full of speed runaway train will never set me free a runaway train I'll stick to being me and stay away from people like you:-) runaway, runaway, is the only thing I do perfectly. what runs through my head when I think of the words regret. ------------------------------------------------ I regret this poem... I regret this poem... I regret this poem... I regret this poem... But, I'm leaving it up because I can By:PD

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Date: 8/8/2015 3:43:00 PM
Glad you left it up because you can AND, do you mind if I hitch a ride? Cause it's a GOOD thing to be a runaway train when it inspires poetry like yours...See you at the next depot. All A-BOARD!!
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Date: 8/7/2015 12:07:00 PM
I like it. There's nothing like the thrill and excitement of a runaway train ride. Thank you.~ €hristian
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Date: 8/4/2015 9:13:00 PM
LOL, i SEE WHY..... , Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. **SKAT**
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Date: 8/3/2015 12:11:00 AM
Emotions as deep as a tunnel through a mountain. No regrets! Especially not for this poem.
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Date: 2/15/2014 11:46:00 AM
Linda This is a very different and unique write. Very powerful and deep. Interesting and imaginative. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my My Willpower poem
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Date: 8/8/2013 4:32:00 AM
very creative write Linda.....best wishes
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Date: 6/2/2013 2:33:00 PM
So thankful that your Runaway Train passed by my isolated town Linda - hope you don't mind that hopped aboard - I don't need a destination as long as you keep giving me powwerful and emotional views - I'm fascinated by 'train hopping' - 'train on the brain' - beautiful vulnerability in this write my friend - J.A.B. %
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Date: 5/2/2013 5:22:00 PM
This reminds me of the song "Run Away Train" by Soul Asylum, and I watch Thomas the train with my g- daughter too, nicely done. Thank you for liking my Glossy Blooms xo's ;}
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Date: 12/21/2012 4:18:00 AM
there is no doubt in my mind, you are certainly on track, i like this Linda, it is a little different from your norm....another side to you perhaps?
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Date: 6/10/2011 6:02:00 PM
a great write, very creative.
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Date: 10/29/2010 8:22:00 PM
Awy-- Chris beat me to this with the typo and hmm Chris what are you up to?? Curious much??? HI pd-- hope to see you soon!!!! miss you loads here!
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:31:00 PM
Thought provoking. masterfully done PD. Thanks for the comment. Robert
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Date: 6/1/2010 8:31:00 PM
It does seem like we have so many runaway trains in our life--really liked how you presented your thoughts in this one :) & that reference to that little engine that could was definitely a nice touch! see you around :)
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Date: 5/29/2010 10:51:00 PM
Wow powerful poem! I liked it. I love trains. I've lived close to one several times in my life. They lull me to sleep, reminding me of my childhood home. Great poem. PD
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Date: 5/28/2010 8:41:00 PM
"I think I can, -I think I can, but I better not I think I can ,-I think I can I' ll give it my best shot" I like this. One of your better long ones :)
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Date: 5/28/2010 11:49:00 AM
good poem
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Date: 5/27/2010 2:11:00 PM
i added the joker on poetrypub. he looks cool.lol, but maybe not? anyway, have a slam-tastical day P to the D! -always
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Date: 5/26/2010 8:01:00 AM
Smile, "Excellent, Stirring, Gripping & Profound!" ~ What a flowing reflection of perhaps ones own life!? Albeit somewhat shadowed amid its descriptive content; there seems to a ray of light which the writer exudes between these, the lines of their verse....Smile, I believe I see a potential bard here perhaps!? ~ "Have A Very Beautiful & Lovely Day, Filled With Warmth & Love," John! ~ "Bye":)
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Date: 5/20/2010 4:47:00 PM
Wow, very nice p.d Thank you for the comment by the way, I'm sure you'll find the cure !! :) Sincerely yours, Cassie
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Date: 5/20/2010 4:34:00 PM
You really RAN away with it too here. I liked it, P.D. Just got done reading all the winners just now and I think yours stands up to them as well. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/19/2010 5:32:00 AM
nice PD. and thank you, you can read now though (: i just finished. let me know what you think. <3 Always ~Rain
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:45:00 PM
Nice write, PD. Runaway train is a dangerous thing. Good luck in the contest. And thank you for your comments on my latest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 5/18/2010 4:26:00 PM
i love this one...really good :) thank you so much for all the nice things you've said about me..i really appreciate it...more then you'll ever know :D Lots Of LOVE, SammaJamma <3
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:50:00 PM
great write...i love the 4th stanza...God Bless and take care...~Brittany~
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Date: 5/18/2010 7:28:00 AM
Wishing you the best in the contest with this fantastic poem PD. Love, Carol
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