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I Recall

I recall the days of past, sitting with friends long lost. Those innocent moments, of which i often lament. Sitting alone on a full moon night, savoring the beautiful sight. I recall those youthful days. When we would spend our time in a nearby bay. Running about in the sandy shores. Exploring the sandy contours. One day responsibilities fell on my shoulders, a lot of questions with very few answers. two brothers and one sister, Had I to foster. No longer had I time to play, as there were bills to pay. nurtured my siblings, Into responsible human beings. Then they left making my life bereft, of any companion. Taking away all the fun. Craving for mate(s) I would hang out till late. In the bay of my youthful days. But i guess it was my fate, to spend my life without any mate(s).

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Date: 11/12/2013 3:23:00 AM
nice lines my friend :) A~D
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 11/12/2013 9:10:00 PM
THNX BUDDY ~V~
Date: 11/11/2013 11:34:00 PM
a lovely write so very well penned those lively days to later busy ones, and back again being left alone, such a subtle write,nice enjoyed
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Date: 11/12/2013 2:52:00 AM
thank you niki ~V~
Date: 11/11/2013 10:36:00 AM
Having been deprived of so many mates over my lifetime, this poem was very poignant for me, and I will remember it. Such an action establishes a link, so you're never completely along. Best wishes Vinayak.
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 11/11/2013 9:05:00 PM
Thank you Mr Peterson
Date: 11/4/2013 5:59:00 AM
- Yesterday .... never come back. - A clever poem in rhyme Vinayak !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 11/8/2013 1:31:00 AM
thank you anne
Date: 11/3/2013 10:10:00 PM
Please note that i used mate as a alternate for friend so tat i can make it rhyme. Enjoy ~V~
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