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I Pod

THE ‘I’ POD What do you do when life becomes all about I and Me? What do I want, what do I need, what would I like to be when I grow up. What kind of life do I want, what do I aspire to be. How can I profit from this world, how can I benefit from this life? So I live in this Pod consumed by all the things that I want. Peeking out only momentarily to witness the sufferings of others. D murder rate, D kidnapping rate, D mortality rate, D child abuse rate. And just the mere thought of the happenings around the I, send I back to the pod. But is my Pod and I control what comes and goes within that pod, and oh what a beautiful Pod it is. It’s my pod, the ‘I’ POD.

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Date: 10/11/2016 4:40:00 PM
A wonderful portrayal of our current society. I also like the way you revolved your writing on the theme of "I" Pod. Congrats Carla, for having your poem featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 7/23/2016 4:57:00 PM
Carla, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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