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I Once Was

I once Was i once was a thought protected by my actions, i once was a sound of many crashing waves, directed into the capacity of what you became, appearance declined my vision unwillingly divided, perhaps unity is to ovecome the worlds meaning of success, today calls for change in our perception, was i once taught to not think of you... --

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/10/2016 11:18:00 PM
TRAVIS J, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. always **SKAT**
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Date: 5/10/2011 8:14:00 AM
thank you
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Date: 5/10/2011 4:58:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Travis. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/9/2011 4:37:00 PM
well said
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Date: 5/9/2011 4:31:00 PM
success is love, treating people right, honesty, valor, courage, respecting your family, that is only the tip of the iceberg..nothing is wrong with wanting a successful career or wealth if you want to use it to help others or donate etc..so many people afraid to pray for wealth because of greed..it depends why you want it, success is saying sorry for the grief you have caused others too
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Date: 5/9/2011 4:28:00 PM
ok thanks for your time and welcoming
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Date: 5/9/2011 4:24:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. hope u have fun and luv sharing with many other poets ... keep posting your great material .. check our our free contests too and good luck..luv..
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Date: 5/9/2011 4:20:00 PM
thank you
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Date: 5/9/2011 4:14:00 PM
So enjoyed reading this lovely creative write Travis .. amazing emotional lines.. we are who we are luv..
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