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I need you now Never been the one To pick up the phone Lovers undone, so lost on the run Emotions burning all bridges as flames consume The heat of love knowing I have lost it all Holding the bottle I tumble and fall Used to have it, used to be the fastest ball Now I shake and tremble afraid to make the last call Always been a country boy Playing with my truck and all my other men toys You never saw a tear from me But I have cried, behind the curtain you never see Never could I ever say, I need you now, don’t go away Being strong and hiding tears of pain and sorrow Pushed you all away, there is no tomorrows Inside I am the child, hoping for love somehow Never been the one To pick up the phone Lovers always wondered why Bridges burnt were safer back then Holding on to long lost dreams Losing my grip and fading fast If only I wasn’t hidden so well you would surely have screamed The pain of despair never far from Jim Beam Never been the one To pick up the phone Lovers always wonder why My guitar never played a song goodbye Traveling down lonely roads Motels and one gas station towns Dust filled shoes and dust filled dreams I rest my bones, till the next bus is seen Never been the one To pick up the phone Lovers always wondered why While I wandered away wishing death came by Never been the one To pick up the phone Always wondered if true love exists Lost love still would slash my lifeless wrists

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Date: 7/1/2016 10:42:00 AM
Hi Arthur, I big fan of country music and I'm also fan of your incredible pen. With that being said, I must say that you have caputured the feeling and emotion of good country song in this well written piece. Great song 7 :-) Alexis
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/10/2016 11:12:00 PM
You are so sweet! Feel free to send me some country music you like!
Date: 6/27/2016 11:44:00 AM
hugs...this is more than just a country song, I can feel the infusion of the words as it strums the lines, like every guitar pick plucked on the journey.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/10/2016 11:12:00 PM
:) thanks Cas!!! Hugs
Date: 6/18/2016 8:26:00 PM
You cowboys are all the same. Tough as nails on the outside. Would like to have heard that guitar slide Arthur.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/10/2016 11:10:00 PM
Well Scots are even tougher! Cowboys with Scotch! :)
Date: 6/18/2016 9:46:00 AM
Arthur, I enjoyed your song. Did you put it in the lyrics contest from a while back. Maybe not (since it seems rather new). I love the refrain. At the same time, it's sad that someone would not be inclined to just pick up that phone. So much better than the alternative suggested!!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/10/2016 11:11:00 PM
Hi Andrea, man I am so far behind, well me and country music make sadness into music! :)
Date: 6/18/2016 1:00:00 AM
I always wondered if true love exists too Arthur.Its strange how many sing of love,write about love,need love,yet few find the whole of it. 'My guitar never played a song goodbye' love this line Arthur. And to cry behind the curtains..Oh yes we all do that I believe..Then when the curtains open we have to play the clown's role..and put a wide small for this hungry world.Excellent poem and A fave.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/18/2016 10:30:00 PM
You are so very kind, nothing more sweet than someone who resonates the poem written! Hugs!
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 6/18/2016 1:01:00 AM
Wide smile I meant : ) : )
Date: 6/14/2016 12:49:00 AM
I see you are channeling your inner cowboy! Great song Arthur.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/18/2016 10:29:00 PM
Thanks Richard! :)
Date: 6/13/2016 7:25:00 PM
One heck of a song Arturo.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/18/2016 10:29:00 PM
Thanks Tim

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