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I Need You Not

You want to be alone. You need me not. Your hand can find my hand and move away. When you are close, I blush, I feel so hot, But you’ll for sure get rid of me someday… You need to set your world where you’re a king, You need your space where all the stars are yours, Let all the winds the storm of freedom bring, Let all the keys unlock the heaven’s doors. I know you well. I feel the same. I do, But you’re so deep in your amazing space, That I give up, I’m leaving you with you, I hope, it was the last, the fastest race. I’ll spread my wings to fly above this all, My empty heart’s the only thing I’ve got. You seem so far, you seem so far and small… I want to be alone. I need you not.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/17/2024 11:42:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/7/2016 2:23:00 AM
VICTORIA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 9/12/2015 8:11:00 AM
:)
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Date: 5/14/2014 10:02:00 AM
Thank you for sharing:) It touched my heart
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Date: 4/20/2013 7:01:00 AM
Victoria, I feel I have just read something from a very talented and seasoned poet. I enjoyed this and I wish you well in PSoup land. I believe you will gather many readers.... Welcome.... Jake
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Date: 4/19/2013 10:19:00 PM
Hi Victoria , "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 4/19/2013 8:19:00 PM
Victoria :-), Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT"
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Date: 4/19/2013 6:20:00 PM
Nice piece thank u for sharing. I know how it is to try n get no where but u r right in the end all we got is our selves :) edward
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