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"i Need You"

I cant make things go my way not even the way you love me theres no way to enter through your doors because it has a sign on it saying shall not "received" trying to open these black doors that has no nob or windows please take me show me what i been fussing about bring your caring,good feeling and loving back brace me with surrounding and lots of time spend with you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/6/2010 5:56:00 AM
Te'Arra, so sentimental this write, so real, I almost want to hush you ... keep on doing this, well done.
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Date: 6/24/2010 11:08:00 AM
There are so many amazing poems written and posted everyday here at PoetrySoup. The poets here grow with each poem they write. It is a pleasure to read them and I am so happy yours is among them today Te'Arra. Love, Carol
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