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I Need Space!

I need space Space to let my ideas run freeely Forbidden am i to let my feet slide amongst the wet gravel Forbidden to let the rain run gently through the cracks of my fingers ..How id love to watch the autumn leaves fall upon the dew stained grass I need space Space to live..space to love ..love you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/25/2010 11:43:00 AM
Power to You!!!! Live not to waste a moment. Thx,Jan.
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Date: 4/25/2010 11:31:00 AM
excellent,what a wonderful write,..p.d.
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Date: 4/25/2010 10:51:00 AM
Great write with a little romance thrown into the mix...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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