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I miss you, I am still here, I look around will have no peace until I found you back. Because I know the ease with which our words do flow is so unique as if we speak with one voice. Ohh you'll be back I know, but still I miss you. Time goes slow I do smile at the fun we have, the words we write with you here the world is bright. This is a tribute so to speak I'll give you another week (just kiddin'). I miss you :) *** October 10, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Fj Thomas

Date: 3/6/2018 11:33:00 PM

I do hope you and he have since been reunited. This is beautiful D.

Edwin Alluso

Date: 10/23/2017 6:33:00 PM

I love the poem

Darren White
Date: 10/24/2017 2:21:00 AM

Thank you :)

Frances Schiavina

Date: 10/19/2017 11:09:00 AM

Beautiful poem Darren.

Darren White
Date: 10/20/2017 5:22:00 AM

Thanks Frances :)

Michael Jones

Date: 10/15/2017 12:35:00 PM

I love the rhyme in the first stanza. Funny and heartfelt.

Darren White
Date: 10/16/2017 2:17:00 PM

Thank you, Michael :)

Rose Vergara

Date: 10/14/2017 10:23:00 AM

Beautifully written. Give her time for sure she is missing you too!

Darren White
Date: 10/14/2017 10:24:00 AM

Thank you, I know he does :)

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/14/2017 9:28:00 AM

I am here ....just look at me ....

Darren White
Date: 10/14/2017 10:25:00 AM

Pfft.... you make me smile :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/13/2017 1:22:00 PM

Love this tender loving write, Darren, you express your words so very well..Hugs Eve ~`*

Darren White
Date: 10/14/2017 10:26:00 AM

Hugs back Eve. Thank you :)

White Wolf

Date: 10/12/2017 11:51:00 PM

I do enjoy a good rhyme. Especially one well done and smooth with heart! I have a good friend that I haven't seen for 2 years, but once a friend they are always in your heart.

Darren White
Date: 10/12/2017 11:58:00 PM

That is so true, good friends always stay with you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/12/2017 8:33:00 AM

Quite a touching poem--Hope you will together soon, Darren!

Darren White
Date: 10/12/2017 9:04:00 AM

Thank you Vijay :)

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 10/11/2017 11:15:00 PM

Hi how are you dear poet. Finally got my computer straightened out. Threatened to reboot it out the back door. A lighthearted poem with an underlying wistfulness. I love it.

Darren White
Date: 10/11/2017 11:48:00 PM

LOL Patricia!! Reboot another back in then, or else I'd miss you!. I was already wondering where you'd suddenly disappeared to :D

Rocell Grace Aranas

Date: 10/11/2017 8:18:00 PM

I miss you too!!lol.. Thank you for giving a positive comment on my poem. You have such a very wonderful writer ! Thanks once again..Keep safe!

Darren White
Date: 10/11/2017 11:48:00 PM

HHehe, you're welcome, and thank you :)

Sara Ella

Date: 10/11/2017 9:14:00 AM

:) I love this sooooo much and I hope he returns soon! <3

Darren White
Date: 10/11/2017 11:48:00 PM

So do I, I miss him :)

Tim Smith

Date: 10/11/2017 7:47:00 AM

Beautiful sentiments. There has been a lot of absence here and makes me not want to be here as often. There are many I miss too...see you soon off to therapy

Darren White
Date: 10/11/2017 7:49:00 AM

Yeah, I know Tim, go to therapy, we speak soon :)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/10/2017 11:40:00 PM

Wonderful write, my friend, and I was thinking how wonderful it would be if I was the friend you missed ... but I hold no such illusions, for we have had little time to chat. Superb write, Buddy - we'll hook up for a chat one of these days ... I have faith! ;-) <3

Darren White
Date: 10/10/2017 11:46:00 PM

There's a strange thing on Soup buddy <3 The people I love most here just 'disappear'. I mean not really disappear, I can mail them, but ... but... I told Kim no names, because there are more friends here who can read it as a tribute to them. Even though it is written for one friend in particular. Does it matter? NO. You and I are here, and we'll get our chat time soon and then it will be special :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/10/2017 5:16:00 PM

Lovely tribute to an absent friend. I hope he reads it and returns.

Darren White
Date: 10/10/2017 11:46:00 PM

I am sure he has read it, now here's to hoping he will return soon :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/10/2017 5:13:00 PM

A lovely and endearing write Darren full of authentic sentiments. Enjoyed! :)

Darren White
Date: 10/10/2017 11:47:00 PM

Thank you Susan :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/10/2017 4:33:00 PM

So wonderfully sweet Darren :) ease is bliss it is it is :) xomo!

Darren White
Date: 10/10/2017 11:47:00 PM

thanks mo :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/10/2017 10:37:00 AM

I love heartstrings poetry, Darren. This qualifies ... and it moves the reader w/to the incandescent light hidden behind the cover of a warm smile. Your poem smiles brightly. Pure poetry. Love and joy forever.

Darren White
Date: 10/10/2017 11:48:00 PM

Thank you so much Freddy, you always have such beautiful words for me :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/10/2017 7:23:00 AM

So who are we talking about? Chris or someone else? Just kiddin’ lightens the mood, with ultimately “I miss you” and smiley face :)

Darren White
Date: 10/10/2017 7:28:00 AM

Hehe Kim, no names! It is just a heartfelt poem for a dear friend, with a smile and a load of fondness :)