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I Miss You

I miss you, maybe you can extend your long hand so I can kiss it I miss you, maybe you can surrender your one hug so I can stay warm I miss you, maybe you should continue spraying the light, so am less dimmer I miss you, you came like a parcel with no name And left like a talent with only a mellow blade I will always miss you, you left me shivering wondering why

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James Fraser

Date: 3/4/2015 1:00:00 PM

Sad dark poetry Njeri, I hope the loss is fictional, James....

James Fraser
Date: 3/5/2015 12:43:00 PM

Sorry to hear about your cousin Njeri, James.

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/4/2015 10:56:00 PM

I just lost a cousin so this poem is kinda in those lines of a loss. Thank you James

Mikayla Mitts

Date: 3/4/2015 11:43:00 AM

This poem is wonderful and I feel like I know how you're feeling. Love and hugs Kayla Rose*)

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/4/2015 10:54:00 PM

Thank you Kayla. Am better now.

Herzel Poshiwa

Date: 3/4/2015 12:23:00 AM

Wondering why,Im loving your work

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/4/2015 10:53:00 PM

Thank you Herzel

Janet Eaton

Date: 3/3/2015 6:27:00 PM

The feeling of loss you have when you miss someone can make you feel so empty and alone. Such a sad poem but a great write. Hugs janet

Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 3/4/2015 10:50:00 PM

Having recently lost a family member, my mind is full of memories. And those memories can make one feel "empty and alone" thank you so much Janet for your comforting words. May God bless you