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I Miss You

It was a bright summer day But in my mind my world was tumbling down on me You left me You betrayed me, how could you? Now people judge me. It was your mistake not mine People still ask me where you are but i'm too ashamed to say. Who are you? Why did you do this to me? If you loved me you would have never left me. I'm so angry that you left; it’s hard for me to write You’re mad at me and I cry. But in reality i'm mad I’m angry and I don’t know what to do with that anger And when you call I just cry. I forgot, ill write to you tomorrow But i'm so angry that I choose to forget. Why is it so hard for me to understand you left by mistake. But you abandoned me on purpose. Why can’t I be upset with you for a change. My birthdays next week and I cry on that day For the past 4 years you haven’t been there You tell me you love me but I don’t feel it. Can you come back and hug me one more time? When are you coming back? I miss you daddy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/19/2013 1:54:00 PM
Hola, Nayeli. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 6/19/2013 8:09:00 AM
Nayeli, a heartfelt poem... your first poem is amazing, and reads with deep emotions., Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/19/2013 5:17:00 AM
Hey, Naveli! - Pleased to read your first poem in the P-Soup! - You write very well. - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us :) - Here it is: give to get, comments - then you will get feedback on your writing - I love get feedback on what I write. - Wish you luck my "new friend" - Have fun with poetry! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/18/2013 8:58:00 AM
you had me at awe once I was near the end, such sadness you have ,, and writing it gives yourself such a release and weight on your shoulder, enjoyed your write Nayeli, ~always, Linda
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Date: 6/18/2013 8:44:00 AM
welcome to the soup Naveli a heartfelt poem covering loss of a parent fine pen Shadow
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Date: 6/18/2013 7:23:00 AM
Sad but well written poem on such a common scenario unfortunately. Xx
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