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I Miss You

I miss you as much as the sun would miss the dawn if the dawn would one day decide it wasn't going to show up that morning. I miss you as much as a bird would it's song if for one day it couldn't sing for me in the early morning hours. I miss us like we used to be when the moon shone down upon your face. I'm missing the times we shared in the special place, that will start to fade away if for one moment I'd ever forget how you touched my life. That place I'm missing you most is in my heart. By:Betty L. Hall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/14/2016 6:52:00 PM
Betty Hall, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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Date: 10/4/2012 8:17:00 AM
lovely done Betty
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Date: 3/9/2011 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Betty. Love Carol
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Date: 1/14/2011 1:28:00 PM
Thank you everyone for the positive feed back. Betty L. Hall
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Date: 1/13/2011 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Betty. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/12/2011 1:46:00 PM
interesting continuity, charming and compelling. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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Date: 8/30/2010 4:30:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Betty. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 2:59:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. I really enjoyed reading your poem. I miss you too long lost relative.
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Date: 8/27/2010 5:55:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your lovely creative write tonight.. there are many contests offered on the contest page ..check them out.. and enter.. a good way to have your poetry read more often..luv..
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Date: 8/27/2010 4:50:00 PM
It sounds real sad, i hope it gets better 4 U*LV~SKAT
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