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Romance with a Chimera Art Print by Dorina Costras - Pixels

I miss the one who stole my heart Before the waves pulled us apart When craving throbbed in every vein We sang in tune to love’s refrain. I miss the sparkle in her eyes The sensual timbre of her voice The urge to share, to give and take A tacit wish, a mutual choice. I miss the moments when at night We watched in awe, silent delight, The sequined twinkling in the sky. From time to time a kiss, a sigh. I miss the man who made me yearn To touch and yield, with passion burn. He made each fibre thrill within I lived and breathed only for him. I miss the touches of his hand The sense of home within his arms Where feelings bloomed and love was sweet His knowing smiles were graced with charms. I miss the rhythm of his love His kisses raining from above, The breathless rapture of my soul I miss the man who made me whole. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ A Callman Collaboration Paul Callus and Eileen Manassian

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Date: 11/7/2023 5:49:00 AM
You both write so well together. A pleasure to read again.
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Date: 9/1/2023 7:02:00 AM
Yes, I can appreciate the missing of one’s former self. As always you find the right words.
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Date: 7/12/2023 2:36:00 PM
Finally a poetic piece romantic for a man. I loved it. It paid me a lot of back pay from the womans side. I'm impressed.
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The Situation
Date: 7/12/2023 2:36:00 PM
added it to my favs.
Date: 6/7/2023 8:19:00 AM
Such a beautiful pen Eileen, so romantic and passionate. Hope all is well with you. Blessings always, Gordon
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Date: 4/11/2023 4:20:00 PM
Great collaboration !!!
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 6/23/2023 4:50:00 AM
I read this over and over and love how every line flows
Date: 3/8/2023 3:21:00 PM
well done Eileen and Paul, I'm someone who really loves poems with passion, and this one touches my heart...
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Date: 2/12/2023 6:44:00 PM
This poem, written by two extremely excellent poets, strikes me as intense and honest. I'm glad to have discovered this gem, and I pray that you two stay well and happy. Added to my fave.
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Date: 1/25/2023 5:09:00 PM
Wow, love the heat, the sincerity, excellent poetry, by two excellent poets. so glad i'm here to have read this gem, stay well both of you's..Harry
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Date: 1/23/2023 12:43:00 PM
Miss these pens that make me sigh - the art that brings the sun - when heaven cries!
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Date: 1/22/2023 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations Eileen! Today our collaboration was awarded POTW.
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Date: 1/16/2023 10:17:00 AM
Paul and Eileen, poetic lovers spin a tale eternal. Lovely, folks. ~;o]
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Date: 1/16/2023 2:59:00 AM
Thank you dear Eileen for once again mixing your ink with mine. It is always a pleasure to collaborate with you. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/16/2023 6:20:00 AM
Always always always love collaborating with you. Thank you for thinking of me. You're such a talented poet. It's a honor that you want to mix inks with me. Looking forward to more in the future.
Date: 1/15/2023 1:32:00 PM
a beautifully crafted collaboration, eileen and paul! brilliantly written...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/16/2023 6:21:00 AM
Thank you, dear. Paul always leads in these collaborations and I follow, though he's a tough act to follow. ;). Hope all is well with you.
Date: 1/15/2023 12:07:00 PM
Absence certainly makes the heart grow fonder Eileen, yourself and Paul work so well together, a seamless collaboration. I hope you are keeping well. Tom
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/16/2023 6:24:00 AM
Thank you for these words of commendation! Much appreciated. It is a pleasure working with Paul. We have the same rhythm.

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