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I Miss You

Oh this winter; Begone The cold made bitter with a relentless wind; Begone Please, Spring, push it back Lean, shove, melt it back Summer warmth I miss you Severe clear days I miss you Horses hot breath, Smell of rain, I miss you. Lazy river, lulling heart beats into a molasses dream. A stick with a leaf sail steers through diamonds as the sun-sparkles reflect off the idle meandering purposeless river. I miss you.

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Cynthia Ferguson

Date: 9/20/2014 5:07:00 AM

that is the sweetest little poem ever :)

Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 9/20/2014 1:26:00 PM

Thank you so much Cynthia. Your comment sent me back to read it again. And it fits my current melancholy ... ~J~

Daver Austin

Date: 9/15/2014 3:16:00 PM

I especially like the last group. Good stuff. Congrats on the selection. daver

Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 9/15/2014 3:35:00 PM

Always thought this poem was a little thin. So, the last verse made it come together some better. I too, like the last 'group.' With a little work, it would make two nice Haiku. ~J~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/27/2012 12:28:00 PM

LOVELY POEM WRITTEN HERE!!!! Love from Norway and Anne-Lise

Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 1/27/2012 12:35:00 PM

Thank you very much! So nice of you to stop by and enjoy the read. ~J~

James Fraser

Date: 5/13/2011 5:41:00 PM

Oh my!, oh to be at this lazy river. Delightful poetry Judith. You have written a gem here. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Judith Angell Meyer
Date: 1/27/2012 12:37:00 PM

Sorry I missed this when you wrote it. Would love to be at this river right now instead of the wind and bitter cold outside today. Thank you James. ~J~

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/8/2009 8:26:00 PM

The seasons of a love shared perhaps? This is very sweetly written with all the sadness splashed in there too.

Rp Kumari

Date: 4/10/2009 3:49:00 PM

I love this poem, i wonder are you missing the weather or soemeone who you shared time with all year round?

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/6/2009 11:30:00 AM

This is truly beautiful, and somehow I get the feeling you miss more than the upcoming season. Love that amazing last verse. Noticing Trudy's comment, hope you are well Judith. So great to read you. Love, Shar

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 4/6/2009 10:13:00 AM

This is beautiful Mom! Hope you're feeling better. Love you! Tru