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I Met the Man

I met the man Who has become The man, my father Fought so hard To not become To always be That lyrical, selfless soul Only out there To rid the world Of joyless, empty measures Filled with pauses, rests and Unintended notes Rather His motivation comes In rushes, bursts and Pure brazen moments Ready to share His love To the sick and the slick The blase pack of Tepid luminaries Each marshal of Their own parade And he conducts Them Honors their passion For something Other than The driftless pith Of the soured day's Intentions With his merriment And simple brand Of anguish-soothing Feign-removing Love. (8/3/04)

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Date: 7/5/2015 11:52:00 PM
Gosh, this sounded like Jesus you met! Then I read down the comments and saw who it was. Very interesting one!
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Date: 7/8/2015 11:13:00 AM
Thx Andrea. As for Jesus, he stops by my Hanukkah party every year ;)
Date: 7/5/2015 3:11:00 AM
Sounds like you met a great man. I enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 7/5/2015 12:01:00 PM
Thx Njeri, always appreciate the feedback. I was watching a jazz combo in SF, the bandleader/tenor sax player was this man living and loving in the moment, it was quite a sight.
Date: 7/4/2015 10:26:00 PM
You met a giver, a man of joy. The ones who have a tender soul meant to serve and help others with a smile are few and far between.
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Date: 7/4/2015 10:41:00 PM
Thx Janet, I appreciate the visit. You're absolutely right, rare birds indeed.

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