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I Met Her

The underground was packed Like sardines we squeezed in and stacked She was there but not there if you know what I mean Ipods have a tendency to make people ignore each other which is mean Some days I felt myself almost smile at her But I never did quite look, just a quick glance which was a blur It was at late one night In the back coach which had a faulty light I felt someone looking at me And there she was perfect, as perfect could be I... smiled, she smiled back I found myself fixated, on her, dressed in black We didn’t say a word, our eyes said it all Then... we parted. I watched her as the tube pulled away leaning against the wall. When she was out of sight, I kicked myself Why didn’t you say something instead of sitting on the shelf I promised at least to say hello But it was two agonising months before I saw her you know Each day I had bought one flower with a hope to give it to her She was...breath taking dressed in black with fur I hesitated and wondered if she would still recognised me I walked slowly closer as she did the same you see We didn’t say a word for what seemed eternity I must have introduced myself during this time I heard her say in the sweetest rhyme The notes of her name on her breath She almost whispered “Please to meet you, I am Elizabeth” ** A poem for elizabeth wesley I hope you like it**

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Date: 12/22/2015 7:45:00 PM
Hi Sidney, :) stopping by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~ miss you here
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Date: 7/6/2011 12:16:00 PM
very nice Sidney my friend.. lovely treat for elizabeth so sweet.. happy to hear from u luv..hope all is well as I see your creativity is flourishing just fine..happy day luv..
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Date: 7/5/2011 5:56:00 PM
I can't turn my back on your for a second!! Here you go florting with other gals again!! I am going to have to cut your fingers off!
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Date: 7/4/2011 7:47:00 AM
Oh Sid, you take my breath away, I am greatly honoured by this lovely poem. I have been told my eyes are expressive and I do feel as if flirting on a bus would be fun. Thank you for the special special feeling this gives me. Luve Elizabeth :)
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