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I May Crumble

I may crumble from quiet fear That somehow showed right now, right here. I sense stirrings of potent ache. I cannot bear that we may break. This nightmarish foe may not near. How dark formed is in no way clear. While we embraced, bad vibes appeared. If we don’t fight for our love’s sake, I may crumble. To this sad fate we never steered. We must deny it any tear. I’d rather final pills to take. Coiled in our garden is a snake. Should we lose all we now hold dear, I may crumble. ... CayCay Jennings 7-13-16

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Date: 7/20/2016 6:48:00 PM
wow, very well done! hugs xx
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Date: 7/19/2016 11:46:00 PM
A nice little allegorical write, CayCay, well writ. Viv x
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Date: 7/19/2016 6:23:00 AM
An passionate piece that works its way into relating it to our own circumstances CaCay. Excellent! 7 ; )
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Date: 7/16/2016 10:02:00 AM
wow, Caycay, this is a great rondeau. your title is very strong, very clear and good. WELL DONE, my sweet friend. how are you doing?
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Date: 7/13/2016 5:18:00 PM
what a heartfelt, impressive piece which moved me... my stars say you won't crumble dear cay!..huggs
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Date: 7/13/2016 4:39:00 PM
such an emotional write Cay cay i love the form with the impact of the repeated phrase:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/13/2016 4:34:00 PM
Nice Rondeau CayCay...I fear growing old alone.
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