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I Made a Promise

Lukng @ u ryt now I made a prmsing vow I wnt u so much n my lyf 2 myk my drms so bryt I wil hold u n my arms so tyt Luv me wid ol of ur heart 2nyt Translation: Looking at you right now I made a promising vow I want you so much in my life To make my dreams so bright I will hold you in my arms so tight Love me with all of your heart tonight For David's Contest 6th place Winner

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Len Gasun

Date: 10/10/2012 9:28:00 PM

MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN MY DEAR FRIEND! I AM SO PROUD OF YOU!! LOVE LEONORA. Please join my contest.

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/11/2012 12:07:00 AM

thanks dear friend Norie..ok I will and I will try my best :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/10/2012 7:48:00 PM

congrats on your win Maria

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/11/2012 12:06:00 AM

thanks friend Joseph ;)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2012 4:20:00 PM

a cute little romantic one. BIG congrats.

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/11/2012 12:05:00 AM

thanks friend Andrea, big big congrats to you too for winning 1st place...yahoo!! :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/10/2012 12:45:00 PM

It melts the texting heart!!! Nicely done!!!

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/11/2012 12:04:00 AM

thanks friend Carrie :) have a nice day!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/10/2012 9:26:00 AM

MARIA, Congratulations, in David's awesome "text talking" contest... always~pd

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/11/2012 12:02:00 AM

thank you so much lovable PD :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/10/2012 9:15:00 AM

WAY TO GO MARIA .. CONGRATS ON ANOTHER GREAT WIN LUV ..

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/11/2012 12:01:00 AM

thanks friend Linda_Marie, congrats to you too cheers to us!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/10/2012 6:13:00 AM

Short BUT SWEET! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/11/2012 12:00:00 AM

thanks friend Debbie :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/10/2012 5:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in David's "TEXT TALK" contest Maria. Love, Carol

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/10/2012 11:59:00 PM

thanks dear carol and thank you so much for placing me in your contest...take care always!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2012 7:51:00 PM

what a sweet text message. I wish you well in the contest with it.

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 10/10/2012 7:12:00 AM

thanks friend Andrea :)

Len Gasun

Date: 9/9/2012 1:13:00 AM

Oh my!! So romantic and beautiful poem my dear moving me into a dream or fantasy. Congratulations and my BEST WISHES AND LUCK ALWAYS BOTH ON YOUR LOVE LIFE AND MANY BIG WINS!! LUV YAH ALWAYS,

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 9/9/2012 10:07:00 AM

many thanks to you for your unending support..mwauh!! luv you always!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/8/2012 3:58:00 AM

Beautiful Maria - a romantic - message Have a nice weekend. -xoxo love Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway
Date: 9/8/2012 10:39:00 AM

thanks friend anne Lise...have a blessed weekend too :) hugss!!