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In the night our love is shining, Our love was perfect like a dream; Walking hand in hand by a stream. And my soul speaks of love burning, The dark shadows folding around us; Our kisses and words are stardust. This love made my life worth living, Our love is forever and immortal; This is a passion that is eternal. Love for us will never ever be fading, In dreams, silently shines the moon; Then the dawn breaks far to soon. I lay in his strong arms trembling, Words of love falling from his lips; And my tears are full of sweet bliss. In the night our love is shining, And my soul speaks of love burning; This love made my life worth living, Love for us will never ever be fading; I lay in his strong arms trembling. _______________________ Re-write from August 2012 Rhyme For the contest, Favorite Love Poem Sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron Second Place

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Date: 12/17/2015 12:56:00 PM
BROKEN, CONGRATULATIONS on your nice win. ~SKAT~
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Date: 12/17/2015 6:47:00 PM
Thank you Skat
Date: 12/15/2015 11:25:00 PM
What a love Constance. Congratulations on your excellent win!!!
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Date: 12/16/2015 1:32:00 AM
Michael, thanks so much for the excellent and the congratulations ~
Date: 12/15/2015 5:58:00 PM
Beautiful Broken Wings...congrats on your win!:)*smiles*
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Date: 12/15/2015 6:31:00 PM
Laura, thank you for the beautiful, the congrats and the smiles~
Date: 12/15/2015 4:07:00 PM
So very beautiful, Broken Wings. Congratulations on your win and placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/15/2015 6:31:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for the beautiful, the congratulations and the hugs ~
Date: 12/15/2015 12:27:00 PM
Beautiful write, Constance, you never disappoint with your phraseology and rhymes. Congrats on 2nd place, well deserved.
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Date: 12/15/2015 6:32:00 PM
John, thank you for the lovely comment and the congrats ~
Date: 12/15/2015 11:02:00 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/15/2015 6:33:00 PM
Nayda, thank you so much for my placement in your contest, I am honored ~
Date: 12/11/2015 6:58:00 PM
Beautiful! A wonderful tribute for a great lover!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/12/2015 5:15:00 PM
Thomas, I love that word beautiful, thanks so much for visiting my poetry ~
Date: 12/11/2015 5:32:00 PM
Beauty!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/11/2015 6:25:00 PM
Natalie, thanks so much ~
Date: 12/11/2015 5:11:00 PM
So beautiful so sad Broken wings I love the clever way you used lines from the poem to create the final stanza:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 12/11/2015 6:26:00 PM
Jan, thanks for visiting and for the lovely comment, appreciate ~

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