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I Love You Too

The rain falls gently making a soft melody. The flowers smile as they look up at the sky with glee. The birds take shelter in the old oak tree. This is a memory of you and me. You asked will you marry me. You asked with a please. You and me became a we. Our marriage made me so happy. This is a memory of you and me. You went off to war. You couldn't hold me in yours arms anymore. I received a letter from the navy shores. My heart hurt like never before. You were the man I adored. Your last words were, "Our love is true." I didn't know what to do.... All I could say was,"I love you too."

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Skat A

Date: 7/25/2015 11:07:00 PM

KATIE:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/13/2015 1:21:00 AM

Katie, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 7/11/2015 11:27:00 PM

Katie, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/11/2015 4:15:00 PM

- With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup, Katie :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)