I Love You Honey But This Is All About Me

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you don’t know what you’re doing to me how i feel when you come near me happens to me you don’t know what happens to me right next to me when you're standing right next to me take me all of me you on me taste me i'm always me when your with me your scent is me your touch fills me you live inside me you are the best me so please trust me always be with me i couldn't go back to the old me i couldn't stand you not loving me! Maurice Yvonne 11~28~2014

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Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 12/20/2014 8:29:00 AM

MY, my, my. I smiled delightfully filled with joy at the reading of your words surprise! contrast, brief testimony, stay, my friend with you as best friend. Happy holidays. irisrose...

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 12/10/2014 11:51:00 AM

Seducing verses...Well, the poet like honey may attract bees and wasps and the bumble bee.Take care!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2014 10:38:00 PM

Love this one! do you know the song: Don't stand so close to me? It reminds me of that one. thanks for posting new ones up today. and to think you have so many more that you have written and never even shown us yet!!!

Tim Smith

Date: 11/28/2014 6:45:00 PM

Me likes this...cheers

David Meade

Date: 11/28/2014 4:11:00 PM

Another master stroke my dear friend. When you speak of love it is with a gripping passion that only one who has loved deeply and completely can write about. You have drank big drafts from the well allowed us a taste! Well done!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/28/2014 4:10:00 PM

i'm always me when you're with me-I love that line Maurice.When Ee can be ourselves with someone and feel loved..We Wouldnt want that loving feelimg to never end.A beautiful love poem!Charma.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/28/2014 5:18:00 PM

Tanti Auguri..: )

Jan Allison

Date: 11/28/2014 4:09:00 PM

I could say something about 'ME' lol but i will focus your wonderful romantic poem - great imagery and a joy to read - oh and HAPPY BIRTHDAY my lovely friend:-) Hugs Jan xxxxx