I Love You Forever and Ever

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(Rhyme) Eh baby you know me so well What more is there to tell I just want all your Love that shines like stars above. Let me give you now a hot kiss There's so much that we miss I can be forever all that you want And this is not from me just a rant. Lets go somewhere and have some fun I'll always be forever your hot sun Just come and I will open wide hearts door Oh baby just come and take me some more. Just let me be your brightest star The one that's very close not far You know where I am right now Meanwhile my love rhyme for you flows. You just come to me my darling my honey You're got the most radiant smile so sunny Now lets get together and heat the night Just make my heart that loves you burst bright. Your love for me day in and night out just shine And so it is also forever and forever here mine. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,23,2014

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/23/2014 10:00:00 PM

Baby girl this is one rightious right of love and passion, this is one lucky young man to have your heart shine upon him in this romantic way, you've truely given him a gift of the inner heart my young lady poet cheri

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/23/2014 10:49:00 PM

Thank you so much Cheryl my dear friend. You're so sweet and kind to me with all your fabulous comments. Much appreciated my very dear friend.Have a wonderful week! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/23/2014 10:38:00 AM

"Let me give you now a hot kiss!" Sure got my attention, sweet thing! "Oh baby just come and take me some more" And again but this time I drooled as well! LOL Love and hugs, Jack XXXX

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/23/2014 9:28:00 AM

Wonderful poem on love filled with heartfelt passion and romance in boom. 7 i feel here. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/23/2014 9:57:00 AM

My dear friend BL thank you so much for your very awesome comment! So much appreciated so! I always have this wish for my poems to move and inspire the others about Love and God or whatever write about. Have a great week! :) Love and hugs! Xxxx D

Paul Callus

Date: 11/23/2014 8:03:00 AM

Forever and ever!! now that sure is a special kind of love!! Very passionate and sincere. a 7 rating it deserves! Have a nice Sunday, Dorian. // paul

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/23/2014 8:24:00 AM

My dear friend Paul thank you so much for all your kindness. I much appreciate you in all.have a great day week ahead! God bless! :) Love and hugs! xxxxx D.

John Fleming

Date: 11/23/2014 4:25:00 AM

Most charming! :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/23/2014 7:18:00 AM

Thank you so much John for stopping by and kind commtnts! ;) D.Xxxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/23/2014 3:06:00 AM

Lovely n passionate Dorian! Awesome words n beautiful rhyming, love the brightest yet closest star,, a perfect 7 my dear friend!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/23/2014 7:21:00 AM

Thank you so much Dr. Upma my dear friend for your very awesome comment and all! Much appreciated. :) xxxx D.