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I Love You As I Love the Sun

for Juvie, with all my love... I love you as I love the sun, her blinding rays a blessed truth that blaze o'er hill and meadowland and sing a song of winsome youth. Your warmth puts roaring fires to shame, ignites the flame that inward glows, it resonates, and sanctifies my happy heart, the blushing rose. Your tenderness, so blithe and sweet entreats, and gently mystifies, your countenance personifies the glisten in your soft brown eyes. May Helios, that wondrous orb, forever shine, and play her part, and may compassion ever mark the fervent beating of your heart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/10/2009 4:02:00 PM
Keith you warm our hearts with your poetry. I was going to say that Juvie is a lucky lady, but the truth is that we are all lucky to be touched with your kind and tender words. Love Kat x
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Date: 5/10/2009 3:26:00 PM
beautiful poetry..... love the rym you got going on too. ennjoy your day.
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Date: 5/10/2009 8:29:00 AM
i love you as i love the sun,and we all know that the sun is our main source of warmth and light---wonderful and sinciere tribute to the one you love---charma
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Date: 5/10/2009 8:17:00 AM
A beautiful poem, Keith. So glad Juvie makes your heart happy! That's the best part of love. Very nicely written in your own passionate style!
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Date: 5/10/2009 7:04:00 AM
This is so wonderful....how lucky she is.....to be loved this way....magnificent, and so romantic...what a gift you bring to her....
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