I Love You

I LOVE YOU can be communicated and heard But the action of LOVE is more than just words It's more than just letters It should be used as a verb An action that is given A feelng so superb REAL LOVE last forever And true LOVE never fades If you say that "you have loved" I will be questioning your faith Because REAL LOVE last forever It doesn't gradually just change It's a feeling deep with in that nothing should persuade The four letter word used by many depending on the language Some letters are prone to change Although the definition remains the same So when I say I LOVE YOU I mean it so sincerely I end it with your name. Je T'aime Zack Brule

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Lemonia Sims

Date: 5/24/2016 2:47:00 PM

awesome love it a lot great job

Skat A

Date: 5/21/2016 1:15:00 AM

Zack Brule, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/18/2016 12:17:00 AM

Zack, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/17/2016 1:36:00 PM

Ha, this is a great way to send a message. Fa, .... Zack, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@