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I Love You

All I can see is his beautiful eyes His grey eyes always makes people tremble Sometimes that eyes stare at me And sometimes I feel his eyes are following me His is gentle towards everyone Though sometimes his gentleness Would only brings misunderstand But I never take notice of him His smile is as the radiance of light That smile can make all girls in the world melt Sometimes he would smile innocently towards me Yet I never take notice of him His sweet scent always drawn even the bees His unique scent that makes people Want to get close to him Though I never take notice of him Then suddenly everything change in one day That grey eyes of his His gentleness That innocent smile That sweet scent of his All became mine When he said "I love you"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/27/2015 4:26:00 PM
wow I can picture him in my mind - great imagery:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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