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I Love You

I wonder why the world exist To live within i can resist The sun could rise through rain or shine But without my love i will resign. Long is my journey to search for you Across to a desert without a view A paradise that i have lost To find you is my only boast. One time i wish to have a chance To dream of you in moonlight dance Like a bird that swing and sings And wake by the bell that rings. Voice that tells me "That's enough" To love is just to make me laugh I tried my best for just a test But found myself a serious pest. East and west i tried to see My love even or over the sea Wind and wave won't see me free I will sail with a trunk of a tree. Yes! I will do my very best. To find my love and we will rest Up in the heaven God will say Cheer up! And have a nice day! Oh! How happy i would be! Smiling like a bumble bee A flower that must only be Exclusive for a bumble bee Unite our hearts, to you oh God To fall in love is not too bad The only thing to you i ask To love him much, my only task.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/14/2014 10:17:00 AM
So great a piece, i love the rhyme and the rhythm.
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Date: 7/3/2013 11:09:00 PM
Beautiful poem. :D
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Date: 2/22/2013 3:16:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem today!!! :)
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Date: 2/20/2013 2:52:00 PM
Yes new friend this is Rhyme and the type of rhyme it is ..is Couplets. It is very nice that all your END rhyme [which means only the last word in each line rhymes] is not always perfect rhyme. When you rhyme God with bad..you are rhyming the consanat sound of the D! That's vey GOOD! Light & Love
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