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I Love You

I Love You 8/28/12 By Sami LaRose I love you By: Sami J LaRose If loving you is like a disease than I've been sick forever. Falling in love with you each day only turns my heart more tender. As the smiles turn into frowns you feel as if your whole world has been flipped upside down. Trapped in what seems like a never ending cycle; Fall in love, get hurt, start over Sometimes that's the only way I could feel sober. As the nights get later, my hope vanishes into space Another sleepless night alone is disgrace. Call it lust, call it love Doesn't matter to me, Do whatever you want as long as it makes you happy; Just don't forget about me and all of our memories. At once we loved deeply, laughed loudly, and had fun But times have changed and there is no longer any sun It's six P.M out past sunset, and the beautiful twilight starts to set into effect A shooting star passes you by, you gently look up and stare at the sky Make a wish, make a wish and only hope that it will come true Too bad it's only another wish about you

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Date: 10/1/2012 12:11:00 PM
Hi Sami J, excellent poem about love, you capture many of the emotional ups and downs. Congratulations on your win. :) Sheri
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Date: 10/1/2012 5:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Get it together" contest Sami. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2012 1:37:00 AM
nice lines! congratulations on your win :) liked it :D
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Date: 9/29/2012 11:42:00 PM
thanks oxo sami
Date: 9/29/2012 12:39:00 AM
Sami, congratulations with your wonderful and well deserved win after expression your thoughts for the ~~India Arie - "Get it together" ~ Contest... It was nice hosting this contest for "Hughes, William" from the soup. Take care~ XOX ~PD
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Date: 9/29/2012 11:41:00 PM
Thank you so much I hadent even known I had won until I saw this
Date: 9/17/2012 2:22:00 PM
SAMI, congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD
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Date: 9/17/2012 2:55:00 PM
Thank you so much! I am very hapy that it did
Date: 9/16/2012 10:13:00 AM
Amazing! Loved this!
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Sami Larose
Date: 9/16/2012 12:09:00 PM
Thank you!

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