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I Love You

I completely love you, mi amore! L ook inside the chambers of my heart and you'll see O bserve these emotions that radiate from me V isions of our future pictured in my mind's eye E ach day my heart breathes, relieved, a sigh Y ears from now we pray, together we'll still be O ur flaws, secondary, our love will see U ndeniably, unconditional, pure love indeed Co-written w/#0459587 Jimmy M. Anderson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/18/2010 5:11:00 AM
Audrey this is a beautiful write from you and Jimmy.. I love the last line.. A favorite of mine :) love Wilma
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Date: 3/12/2010 10:31:00 AM
I LIKE THIS POEM.... YOU HAVE GREAT TALENT...
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Date: 3/10/2010 8:31:00 AM
Ahhh Muy Bonita estas muy bonita....Bueno Very nice....Taz
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Date: 3/7/2010 8:56:00 PM
Very nice................smile!
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Date: 3/6/2010 8:35:00 AM
Filled with love and desire, lovely Acrostic, Audrey! It is a pity that love can change sometimes into hatred. Keep writing and thank you for your kind commen...Love, Gert
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Date: 3/6/2010 12:43:00 AM
Very sweet words Audrey and Jimmy.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 3/5/2010 2:44:00 PM
Oozing with feeling, love and desire. The mix of two, deserved perspire >> James,x
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Date: 3/5/2010 7:37:00 AM
This is another beautiful one Audrey...Love it...Marty
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Date: 3/4/2010 7:00:00 PM
U two are on a romantic roll with yet another glorious poem about our main subject .. LUV... such a joy to read..and ..yes.. I am flying pretty high right now ...as I can see by these words both of u inspire one another to create beauty... a wonderful write...luv.. Linda-Marie.. PS BBF.. I just read Guishi Goku.. all I can is AMAZING... wow.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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