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I Love To Hate You

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Just one look at you Tempting me, teasing me, tormenting me I hate the feelings you evoke Greed Desire Lust Just want to hold you, devour you I don’t want to see you go But I can never resist the last chocolate in the box! 9th March 2015 Contest – Love or Hate – Pick a subject - Shadow Hamilton I chose Love as my theme ~awarded 1st place~

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Afolabi Muideen

Date: 5/1/2015 11:07:00 PM

Congratulation

Jan Allison
Date: 5/2/2015 4:43:00 AM

Thanks so much Afolabi:-) Hugs jan xx

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 3/18/2015 7:46:00 PM

Glad to see this won, big congrats on a sweet win! Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 3/19/2015 5:14:00 AM

Thanks Cecilia:-) Hugs Jan xx

Riss Ryker

Date: 3/14/2015 10:07:00 PM

A delicious winner here! That last line was the bomb!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2015 5:49:00 AM

Thanks Riss:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Meade

Date: 3/14/2015 9:44:00 PM

A delicious poem -- dark chocolates are my favorites. Congratulations on the win . . . well deserved. all the very best.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2015 9:53:00 PM

Oh mine too David - we even put a block in dad's coffin as he loved it too lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Mohamed Adel

Date: 3/13/2015 1:07:00 PM

beautiful poem,Jan, Congrats :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 6:32:00 PM

Many thanks for dropping by Mohamed:-) Hugs Jan xx

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/13/2015 12:31:00 PM

This made me smile Jan.. Can definitely understand your love/ hate relationship for chocolate here.. congratulations on your win as well ;) xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 6:31:00 PM

Thanks so much Wilma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/13/2015 8:13:00 AM

Great to see you on top of the mountain, congratulations.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 8:24:00 AM

Thanks Richard - it doesn't happen often these days so I am basking in the glory lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Butterfly Mantra

Date: 3/13/2015 6:46:00 AM

Congrats on your win Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 7:40:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by -I LOVE your avatar it is stunning! Hugs jan xx

Grace Mutindi

Date: 3/13/2015 2:10:00 AM

Hi Jan, Congrats on your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/13/2015 4:08:00 AM

Thanks so much Grace:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/12/2015 2:28:00 AM

Wow Jan,, love to hate,, brilliant take! Congrats on top place win!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/12/2015 5:24:00 AM

Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Greg Hoffman

Date: 3/11/2015 7:12:00 PM

Who can,congrats on your win with this scrumptious poem

Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2015 7:14:00 PM

Thanks so much for dropping by Greg:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2015 6:23:00 PM

Congrats on an excellent and well deserved win!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2015 6:27:00 PM

Thanks Andrea I was made up with a first and Poem of the day:-) Hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/11/2015 1:39:00 PM

The last chocolate tastes so good, especially if it's a winner!! Congratulations Jan!:) hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2015 3:09:00 PM

It sure does Paul! Hugs jan xxx

Julia Ward

Date: 3/11/2015 8:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win, Jan! Hugs, Julia, xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2015 8:59:00 AM

Thanks Julia:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/11/2015 6:13:00 AM

A chocolaty hug for this poem. Congrats...Love Jan..Rajat

Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2015 6:15:00 AM

Thanks so much Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx

William Gray

Date: 3/11/2015 5:21:00 AM

The irresistible power of chocolate- Great!. Best Wishes Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2015 5:41:00 AM

Thanks so much William I am so so happy:-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/11/2015 2:59:00 AM

weeeee yes who will not be tempted to chocolates.. :D! but I love chocolates before but lately I start quitting from it. :D! sweet JAn hugs.. :D! BIG KUDOS!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2015 5:41:00 AM

Oh Olive do treat yourself from time to time:-) Hugs Jan xx