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I Lost Myself Today

I lost myself today. Walking home I lost my way. Lost in thought, my mind all gray, like dots in patterns of senseless moire, I've faded away. My feelings died today. Emotional turmoil gone astray, once vividly painted, now, dull clay, colorless, lifeless and dark in dismay. Spirit broken as passions flay. My heart broke today. The love it had has drained away like shards of crystal on stone parquet shattered to pieces in my emotional fray, left bleeding and broken in dismay. The world stopped today. Spinning slowly, the time fading away loosing the fight in this ethereal display. The daylight goes dark with each fading ray, eternally black in lights decay. My words won't come today. Just worn out dribble and tired cliche, cloudy, my thoughts are complete disarray with meaningless babble and nothing to say, so lost without my words today.
01/24/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/1/2020 6:46:00 PM
hmmm, seen this one too. I wonder if I have seen all the poems on your list, Ralph! Let me go to one more.And by the way, this oldie of yours fits so well with 2020.
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Date: 4/21/2020 9:53:00 AM
Love the symmetry not only visually but in you flow. Masterfully crafted, James.
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James Inman
Date: 4/21/2020 11:24:00 AM
You have a daunting task ahead you to read all of the contest poems. I can't wait to read some myself. This was about an especially dark day I was having. I imagine most of us do at times. Thank you for the nice comment.
Date: 1/30/2016 10:15:00 PM
Loved the flow of this poem, very beautiful!
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James Inman
Date: 1/31/2016 9:29:00 AM
Thank you Arthur.
Date: 1/28/2016 9:51:00 AM
The bliss from this page cannot be exhausted. This is incredible and wonderful. Great lines and an awesome 7
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James Inman
Date: 1/28/2016 11:47:00 AM
Thanks Funom.
Date: 1/26/2016 7:01:00 AM
Nicely writ, james, even when you can write nothing, write about writing nothing. Reminds me of my poem, 'Rhubarb'. Regards, Viv
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James Inman
Date: 1/26/2016 8:49:00 AM
Thanks for the visit, Viv. Good advice.
Date: 1/25/2016 3:53:00 PM
ralph, great monorhyming!! I remember one time doing a poem with all long A sounds. The rhyming dictionary has tons fo useful words for it!! I love how you captured the feeling of what it means to feel one is without the muse!!
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James Inman
Date: 1/25/2016 8:41:00 PM
Thank you for the nice comment Andrea.
Date: 1/25/2016 8:53:00 AM
James, there is nothing meaningless in this exceptional and spectacular write, your muse is dwelling within waiting to be released, this is a true poem, written by a true poet ~
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James Inman
Date: 1/25/2016 12:30:00 PM
Thank you, BW. You are always so sweet and encouraging with me. It means a lot.
Date: 1/25/2016 7:30:00 AM
Thanks Silent One, haven't had much inspiration lately.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2016 3:16:00 PM
lol, you are so funny !
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James Inman
Date: 1/25/2016 7:38:00 AM
You too!
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James Inman
Date: 1/25/2016 7:37:00 AM
Oh well, I'm sure we'll get over it. Have a nice day.
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James Inman
Date: 1/25/2016 7:35:00 AM
Putting comments in the wrong place, what do you think I mean!
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James Inman
Date: 1/25/2016 7:35:00 AM
Don't really know, silly of me, isn't it?
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James Inman
Date: 1/25/2016 7:34:00 AM
What do mean?
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James Inman
Date: 1/25/2016 7:33:00 AM
James, why do you keep doing this?
Date: 1/24/2016 5:20:00 PM
WOWZER - I could write like this when I am lost for words - excellent write James:-) hugs Jan xx7
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James Inman
Date: 1/24/2016 5:26:00 PM
Thanks Jan. You always make me feel so good with your wonderful comments.
Date: 1/24/2016 4:37:00 PM
Your abundance of rhyming words refutes your line about your thoughts being in complete disarray, James. 25 lines of end rhyme without repeating is phenomenal. Very admirable!
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James Inman
Date: 1/24/2016 5:22:00 PM
Thank you Lin. You're too kind.

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