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I Lost Me

I lost me when i tried to please you when i said what u wanted me to say and did what u wanted me to do when i find the one who is still in here me is all i will ever be

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Michael Jordan

Date: 12/10/2009 7:04:00 AM

Miranda - I believe that there is a very strong person behind these words - I feel a overwhelming strength in you - being true to yourself is important never let anyone interfere with that - Loved this poem hon - Merry Christmas and God Bless, mj

Veronica Joseph

Date: 6/15/2009 11:23:00 AM

thank you for your comments on my poems. This strikes a cord, should be a lesson for all young women....

Charlotte De Bekker

Date: 6/15/2009 8:08:00 AM

I really like this poem. :) I can definately relate to this Charlotte x

James Fraser

Date: 6/13/2009 5:44:00 AM

Delightful write about you Miranda, you have Soup Mail>>James

Patricia Langston-Moran

Date: 6/6/2009 5:47:00 AM

Miranda. Thank you for your comments. This is also a very good piece. Simple and flowing. 'Patricia

Jay Loveless

Date: 6/5/2009 9:39:00 AM

Truth Ringing Clear. This Happens A Lot When We Try To Please Someone. We 'Adapt' And Loose Who We Truly Are For A Time.

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 6/5/2009 7:49:00 AM

Nice poem.

Diane Christian

Date: 6/5/2009 2:47:00 AM

a wonderful poem, some people try to make us who we are not my dad used to always tell me people have to accept you as you are and if they carn't then it is their loss when you say goodbye to them, I think some people will critisise what ever we do i always felt like everything I did was wrong, I wasnt good enough not clever enough but that was just lies, God says we are his children and thats what matters that he loves us, anyway God bless you from diane

Patricia Langston-Moran

Date: 6/4/2009 5:35:00 PM

Miranda...thank you for your comments. I just posted some poetry today and that was one of them. I also loved your poem...excellent. Patricia