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I Lost It

i lost my pencil today, i should've written this poem with it i should've drawn a sketch that would sum up all my feelings i should've, but i didn't. i lost my shoes today, i would've worn them yesterday i thought i'd keep them for a special day, that day has come now i don't have shoes to wear. i lost R20 today, i should've bought a pair of socks i should've bought some veggies from that old lady on the street so she could feed her kids. i thought I’d keep it for a rainy day, that day has come now i don't have a cent. i lost my tongue today, i thought I’d only say something when it suits others. i should've said "i love you mom" i should've said " forgive me LORD" i should've, i should've, i should've. i could've, but i didn't. if GOD could grant you a wish today, would you wish back everything you've lost, or would you ask Him to help you acknowledge the things you still have. you could, 'coz you still have your life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/19/2016 8:05:00 PM
ENJOYING THIS A SECOND TIME...SKAT
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Date: 8/24/2013 7:16:00 AM
Nice philosophy Daurius.Welcome on board.
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Date: 8/6/2013 9:27:00 AM
Amazing ending Daurius ,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs *SKAT*
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Date: 8/6/2013 7:05:00 AM
Hello new member: Daurius ! - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/6/2013 4:34:00 AM
wow, full of regrets...(I should of) Daurius, I would acknowledged and pray in accepting the things I lost. great poem-A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@. .
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