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I Lost

Well, it finally happened. Though I knew it would in time. He got down on one knee, with candles and rose petals all around. Then he pulled out the ring! It was the most romantic thing. I got chills, and tears welled up in my eyes. I couldn't believe it. I knew it would eventually happen, I just never thought so soon. I wasn't expecting it, so when it happened my whole world went black and I lost my breath. My heart pounding out of my chest, I just wish it was me..... Well, it finally happened.... he has moved on, and she will get everything that I ever wanted. The perfect proposal. The perfect ring. The perfect man. The perfect life. I still had plans to be his wife. Sucks for me! But I'll still be here.... Hoping, wishing, waiting.....

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Date: 4/21/2017 9:10:00 AM
if he didn't realize his good thing....then you are better off without his ring....but True Love will find you in time....and that's the simple truth and not just a line....;)
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