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I Long To Write a Poem - Just Right

I long to write a poem just right Between the somber and the light To tease the edges of a heart To hook the reader from the start Seduce them with a metered plea A nuanced message: “follow me” For I invite you to ascend The peaks we’ll reach before the end. To wander lost across the page To tap the knowledge of the sage To walk away wondering why The answer is the endless sigh Why poetry will never die For words are fashioned without guilt In whispering poetic lilt That holds a hand, that tugs a heart Bids you adieu as you depart Rejoices in that gentle touch That poems long for oh so much. ©5/24/2022

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Date: 6/23/2022 7:30:00 PM
Ah, more than “just right”.. your poem is simply splendid, my friend. Belated congratulations, John, for your amazing poem’s recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/8/2022 3:29:00 PM
methinks you have accomplished your task...great read
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Date: 6/2/2022 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD honour, John, although belated. An inspiring poem - yes, you have said all the reasons why we love to read poetry, more than anything else. Beautiful flow and rhyming - insightful! My best to you ~ Mala
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Date: 5/28/2022 4:24:00 AM
Congratulations, John, though belated. Do forgive me! I loved each line. Earthy, true! Not in outer space, nor drowning in Thesaurean imagery. Earthy poetry..,yes! Pangie
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Date: 5/27/2022 3:42:00 PM
John, it is that very yearning that drives so many of us to take up a pen and convert our thoughts and emotions into words that others can relate to. Well stated, congrats on your POTD honor ~ John
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Date: 5/27/2022 5:16:00 AM
I like it nice job. I like how it moves the flow.
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Date: 5/26/2022 10:22:00 PM
A lovely poem. Congratulations on your POTD.
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Date: 5/26/2022 9:03:00 PM
Wonderful John. Congratulations on your POTD honor. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/26/2022 2:38:00 PM
John, well done, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 5/26/2022 1:14:00 PM
Congrats on POTD. Great poem.
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Date: 5/26/2022 12:26:00 PM
You have succeeded, John. Why ? Because, your "words are fashioned without guilt." It is easy to *see* who writes from the heart, and you are one them, my dear friend. You write, not to draw attention to yourself, but, in a way that allows others to feel your thoughts. Congratulations John, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
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Date: 5/26/2022 11:57:00 AM
a perfect poem John, many congrats on POTD xx
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Date: 5/26/2022 11:23:00 AM
John, congratulations on your POTD. Love the personification of poetry - "holds a hand," "bids you adieu," "tease the edges of the heart." Wonderful meter and flow. All the best.
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Date: 5/26/2022 10:10:00 AM
John: I loved the meter of this great POTD. It is such challenge to get that right an I know it involves hours to weave it into rhyme and format. A wonderful piece! Best - Ken
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Date: 5/26/2022 10:09:00 AM
You say that you 'long to write a poem - just right.' Well, I say that you can now yearn to write a 2nd poem - just right. The one I have just read exceeds all expectations! Congrats, John!
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Date: 5/26/2022 9:47:00 AM
Hi John, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/26/2022 9:34:00 AM
Your poem is beautiful and says what we hope our words will convey when words leave our pen. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/26/2022 9:34:00 AM
From start to finish it's 'just right', Congrats on POTD
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Date: 5/26/2022 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations, John. I just knew this poem had to be a P.O.T.D. because it is so perfectly relevant and relational to all of us. You should be very proud of this poem, my friend. I am.
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Date: 5/26/2022 8:08:00 AM
John, a beautiful rhyme poem and congratulations on your deserving POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~Constance
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Date: 5/26/2022 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations, you've done it, and it got you a POTD honor. WTG John. Love the poem and the message. A good description of how poets feel as they put words on a page and hope there is an audience ready for them. Enjoy your special day, John. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 5/26/2022 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. "Beautiful" Have a blessed day.....................
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Date: 5/26/2022 6:07:00 AM
Excellent POTD. A Fave for me. Thank you. Congratulations :)
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Date: 5/26/2022 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD
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Date: 5/26/2022 5:18:00 AM
Some of my favourite poems by some of my favourite poets are about poetry, now you and this must rank amongst them (move over Irving). I absolutely adore this piece. Congratulations on POTD John! Enjoy the day. xomo
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