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I Long For Paris City Lights

there is no better way to greet the morning sun than with a hot croissant and café au lait on a quaint terrace in the mecca of fashion elegance striking a pose à la Coco Chanel before hitting the perfumeries and climbing the heights of the Eiffel Tower to get that bird’s eye view of the Seine and watch twilight descend on Paris as street lights burst in clusters catching her running down the cobble streets just like Cinderella AP: 3rd place 2021, Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on November 18, 2018

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Date: 11/20/2018 4:55:00 PM
Love this one. I couldn't help but think of Claude Monet when I read this one.
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Date: 11/20/2018 4:57:00 PM
That is an awesome compliment, Timothy. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/19/2018 4:16:00 PM
i hope you are there and not just imagining it, line! you've captured how it must feel to be there very well...
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Date: 11/19/2018 4:31:00 PM
Thank you so much for your delightful visit and comment, Ilene. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/19/2018 12:11:00 PM
Croissant & demi served me well for the morning bus trip from Paris to Camp des Loges, but nothing compares with seeing the domes of the Sacré-Coeur after a long trip up North except, of course, watching Cinderellas enjoying Paris. Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/19/2018 1:13:00 PM
Lovely, Rico. Thank you so much for your delightful visit and heartwarming comment.
Date: 11/19/2018 8:34:00 AM
Enchanting poetic trip to Paris! I especially enjoyed those last two lines- what a wonderful ending!! ;)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/19/2018 8:37:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Rhona.
Date: 11/19/2018 4:59:00 AM
Line, I had no idea you feel and speak French! Your amazing personality comes through as I sit here, not sipping coffee, wishing I had coffee and a croissant. I feel like I have been to Paris this morning. Thank you!
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Date: 11/19/2018 8:41:00 AM
LOL my name is french, Caren. Call me anytime for a coffee break in Paris.
Date: 11/18/2018 10:51:00 PM
It is the most beautiful city I have ever seen Line. The language, the lights, the louvre, its charms make it so. I loved your poem! : )
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Date: 11/18/2018 10:56:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie, for your lovely visit and wonderful comment.
Date: 11/18/2018 9:10:00 PM
Paris must hold such mystery and magic for visitors. A great city with so many stories told through the ages. Thank you Line. -Richard
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/18/2018 9:50:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit. Much appreciated.

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