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I Liked Her Hair Long

I liked her hair long my bronze pennant in a slight breeze, smiling face framed in the soft light dappled skin through broken trees, timeless smile hinted laughter hidden under locks both coy and bold as we smiled at our time together secured now young and soon as old, grasping hands grasping eye grasping at remembered moments... as time just flies on by, dreams last long as sunbeams as a cloud moves to overtake winter pallor'd dropping leaves we took as much time as we could rake, sitting next to winter's hearth hands clasped in a familiar tether we welcome season's end life lived well and loved together.

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Date: 3/22/2014 5:33:00 AM
Beautiful and lilting...like a beautiful song! Enjoyed my read.
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Date: 3/21/2014 10:04:00 PM
Genuine romantic love poem. Enjoyed it. -Neelam
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