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I Like It Hot In the Summer

Slender legs kicking sand, the wind twirling her silky hair, something in her hands. The aroma trails from there to here. A thing beautiful is happening. A bikini that only some can wear, a smile that spreads from ear to ear. Hips move, slender legs kicking sand, and something in her hands. The aroma rides the ocean wind. Impatiently …, I waited for her to come my way. The sea blues her beautiful eyes. I have an ocean view from the gaps between her thighs. Her slender legs kicking sand, something wonderful is in her hands, and that smell ... causes excess saliva in my mouth. My stare is frozen on her hands, her dutiful hands. Now, she stands before me. My heart beats leisurely; it usually does whenever she gives me my cup of buzz, my steamy summer love. Four sugars, three creams, just the way I like it; hot 'n' steamy and sweet 'n' creamy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/1/2011 4:19:00 PM
Just as the last line suggests...very well done..Allie
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Date: 7/23/2010 3:05:00 AM
Lol, very steamy indeed, Earle- enjoyed reading this as well! :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 7/23/2010 12:36:00 AM
Wow!!! the way you ended it is truly awesome.
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Date: 7/22/2010 10:24:00 AM
Ha ha, a great write, really enjoyed it, thanks ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/17/2010 8:01:00 AM
Dear Earle, thank you for your kind comment on my poem. It gave me an opportunity to read a few of yours. I particularly like “I Like it Hot in the Summer.” I’m in Mexico right now, and believe me it’s hot on the beach. :) Love, Amy.
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Date: 7/17/2010 4:20:00 AM
Good write, lots of passion. Michael
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Date: 7/17/2010 4:01:00 AM
nice one.. :)
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Date: 7/17/2010 2:44:00 AM
A very sensous write from beginning to end. Captured my attention from beginning to end, excellent piece.
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