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the ward is stamped white a fidelity to fading, sometimes in a smear of shadows in her corner, Lilly sits wheelchair bound her white hair falling like her winks at strangers John's arrival cuts solitude raises Lily's soft shell of aging their homage to love like Billboard vows interlocked fingers that bind intimacy till close knit words trail to song his voice dusky washing over Lily like cologne Broadway tunes "the sun'll come out tomorrow bet your bottom dollar that tomorrow there'll be sun" his affecting gush of song ushers remembrance caught in the tucked curl of her smile stoic remarkable peeling back impairment outside this place of pleading outside what recedes to hollow sands of life sifted into this short hour place of togetherness as they want it to be one soul into another Poem written June 6, 2023

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Date: 6/28/2023 5:17:00 AM
Beautiful verse. Aging is part of the life experience. Take care.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/28/2023 6:05:00 AM
Hi Dennis, Thanks very much for your message. I hope all is well with you. Cheers, Brian
Date: 6/18/2023 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely story/write. Enjoy your day writing away..................
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/18/2023 2:42:00 PM
Thanks very much, Paula. I tend to write on what I observe. The loving devotion of this couple as Broadway tunes punctured the antiseptic air caught my attention. Be well. Sincerely, Brian
Date: 6/12/2023 1:05:00 AM
Wonderful, a huge congratulations
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/12/2023 6:43:00 AM
Thanks very much Terry, for your congratulatory note. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 6/11/2023 5:09:00 PM
Dear Brian, it is with great pleasure that I extend my heartfelt congratulations on your win in the contest. The tender moment you shared through your words left a profound impact on me, and I was deeply moved by the memories you evoked. Your work is truly touching, and I wish you all the best in your future endeavors. Sincerely
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/11/2023 5:32:00 PM
So very thoughtful of you, Lasaad, to voice merit for my poem. My sincere gratitude. My mother's nursing home has given me so many images of compassion. Take care of yourself. Enjoy these warm June days. With appreciation, Brian
Date: 6/11/2023 4:15:00 PM
What vivid portrait you paint with this powerful piece, Brian:-) You took me there! Heartiest congratulations on your top win!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/11/2023 4:52:00 PM
Hello Edward. Thank you for the sincere recognition. The lady described resides on the same nursing home floor as my mother. John's daily care for his wife is limitless. His songs to Lily soar. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 6/10/2023 3:27:00 PM
A tender moment of memories shared. Touching, Brain. Nice entry for the contest my friend. Good luck! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/11/2023 2:11:00 PM
Greetings Bill. My appreciation for your message of support. I think the posting needs some work, some revision yet. I am not quite settled on it. Take care + thank you for your note. Best wishes, Brian

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