I Know

I KNOW I'm silent, this is no poem, is it? No it isn't, although I must admit it rhymes a bit I've been in hospital, my favorite place to be I'm back now, but, you see? My muse didn't come back with me I'll be there soon again, I'm sure I need something decent to cure That darn muse, anyone knows something to lure? Anyways, see you all soon when I start feeling somewhat better Darren (this is no poem, I won't copyright it)

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/14/2018 1:02:00 AM

Oh man... your muse is definitely with you...

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/10/2017 2:29:00 AM

OH...your muse is definitely well. I'm sorry if you are physically not. Hope all is well now. Hugs

Darren White
Date: 9/10/2017 12:16:00 PM

Always with ups and downs, but don't we all. Thyank you my friend :)

Tania Horne

Date: 9/8/2017 6:38:00 AM

Be well. My thoughts and prayers.

Darren White
Date: 9/9/2017 1:03:00 AM

Thank you Tania :)

Carol B.

Date: 9/5/2017 1:43:00 PM

Wishing you a speedy recovery!

Darren White
Date: 9/6/2017 3:48:00 AM

Thanks Carol :)

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/2/2017 8:51:00 AM

Maybe she ran off to Florida with a drunken sailor like mine does on occasion. Just keep writing stream of thought see what comes up. When she sees she is not indespensible she will be back a shot. Take care dear.

Darren White
Date: 9/3/2017 6:59:00 AM

Heh Patricia :) I'll just work myself through it, I will get over it.

Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/2/2017 8:53:00 AM

pS is too a poem!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/2/2017 8:44:00 AM

Well, my muse stayed alive, when I just thought she was gone for good, Darren, yours is just sleeping, she'll soon wake up and shake you up too:)

Darren White
Date: 9/3/2017 6:58:00 AM

I am glad your muse has returned Jo!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/1/2017 5:45:00 PM

Oh this is the best non poem poem I have read, and you know, I really get it now!!! :)

Darren White
Date: 9/3/2017 6:58:00 AM

You really do, yes, And it's not fun at all, is it, my friend :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/1/2017 3:12:00 PM

Darren whatever your health problem is, I would like you to be out of the hospital coming home healthy. Get better soon my friend. Have a nice dy my friend.

Darren White
Date: 9/3/2017 6:56:00 AM

Healthy with limits, but it's ok my friend, thank you for your concern :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/1/2017 2:50:00 PM

Oh man, don't stay away too long, we need you...

Darren White
Date: 9/3/2017 6:55:00 AM

I promise to be back soon Charlie, thank you!

Dean Wood

Date: 9/1/2017 11:38:00 AM

Good to hear from you Darren. Hope you get feeling better real soon!

Darren White
Date: 9/3/2017 6:53:00 AM

I am slowly feeling better, it needs time, thank you Dean :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/1/2017 10:40:00 AM

Your muse may be MIA but your sense of humour has not left you, or us :) perhaps when you catch her again, stitch her toe to yours like Peter Pan's shadow... Hugs and well wishes for you dear sweet poet xomo

Darren White
Date: 9/3/2017 6:53:00 AM

That will never happen my friend

Lin Lane

Date: 9/1/2017 9:31:00 AM

Now that you've shamed her by saying she's left you... lol, Darren, I'm pretty sure she'll be flying right back to your side. I just read that you'd be writing about the sun. So let her guide you to write something as brilliant as its light.

Darren White
Date: 9/3/2017 6:52:00 AM

I'm sure of that, and was I writing about the sun? I thought it was the moon. I love that soft moonlight, as opposed by the too bright sun :)

Tim Smith

Date: 9/1/2017 8:56:00 AM

Your wit is back...tell that muse I miss her

Darren White
Date: 9/3/2017 6:50:00 AM

My muse will be back soon, she's just sulking but that's a boring hobby

White Wolf

Date: 9/1/2017 8:53:00 AM

Just good to see your pen in action, my friend! See you on the "hill"

Darren White
Date: 9/3/2017 6:50:00 AM

Thanks so much for this my dear friend :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/1/2017 8:48:00 AM

My muse must be with yours Darren she is a stroppy mare at times lol. Seriously hope you are better soon and your muse gets back to full strength:-) Glad to see you retaining your sense of humour too hugs jan xx

Darren White
Date: 9/3/2017 6:49:00 AM

Thank Jan, the day I lose my humour will be a bad day. But that hasn't happened yet :)