I Know

I know you're so far, Pain turned around, Tired in body storms, There was pain in the eyes of the sleepless. Distance hurts me to watch you, Sometimes we walk on the roads have not chosen, This is one of them. You know what would be the end of a road, Besides if I do not forget my love, Deep down somewhere, Achieve me with hope, Waiting. you to come, How long two weeks, I'm ready to love you. Feride SERIN

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Anna Lo

Date: 12/6/2012 2:19:00 AM

..çok güzel bir yazma!!..paylasim için tesekkürler.. :) Anna Lo PH P.S. GUnaydin

Chris Lane

Date: 10/25/2012 8:57:00 PM

Nice write! I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for sharing and take care!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/23/2012 5:33:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you Feride. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Richard Palmer

Date: 10/22/2012 10:45:00 AM

welcome to the Soup Feride,wonderful write,hope your love comes soon

Anna Lo

Date: 10/21/2012 8:15:00 PM

MERHABA Feride!!! Welcome to poet soup society..Your 'words of heart' will inspire others..either happy or sad in nature..what's most important is 'BIZ SEVDI'..because 'Love begets Love'..A good day to you in Turkey & I can relate to the sadness of your poem., but we still believe in pure Love & Hope so that someday 'Onlar Yeniden Bir Araya Gelecek'...xoxo Iyi Günler!! ..(i hope i have translated it rightly) :) ...Anna Lo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2012 12:23:00 PM

Longing for your beloved - love it. - Beautifully written Feride. - Have a relaxing weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)