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a thousand goodbyes, and a thousand tears falling; a thousand snowflakes, ethereal I float, cold, tombs are forever goodbye . . . _______________________ January 17, 2016 Poetry/Tanka/I kiss your blue lips Copyright Protected, ID 16-745-550-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Words of Wisdom 3, sponsor, Silent One Third Place

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/30/2016 11:43:00 PM

again, thank you for the sweet reply. LINDA

Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2016 2:49:00 AM

Linda, you are so welcome !!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/29/2016 8:43:00 PM

BROKEN, Congratulations on your "Syllables of Wisdom 3 WIN." Hugs. LINDA -

Constance La France
Date: 1/30/2016 8:37:00 AM

Linda, thank you for the congratulations, hugs back a thousand times ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/23/2016 7:28:00 PM

I LOVED This one, Constance. Congrats.

Constance La France
Date: 1/23/2016 10:10:00 PM

Andrea, thank you so much !!!!

Skat A

Date: 1/21/2016 12:34:00 PM

BROKEN WINGS, congratulations on your Syllables of Wisdom 3 win. *SKAT*

Constance La France
Date: 1/21/2016 4:48:00 PM

Thanks

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/21/2016 4:41:00 AM

Lovely n heartfelt broken .. congrats on big win!

Constance La France
Date: 1/21/2016 9:53:00 AM

Upma, thanks for the lovely and the congrats ~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/20/2016 12:16:00 PM

as eternal as the love you give, deep write, good luck in the contest -*Luv Linda*

Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2016 2:39:00 PM

Thanks

Chrissie Morris Brady

Date: 1/20/2016 9:04:00 AM

Oh, heartacheing...

Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2016 10:23:00 AM

Chrissie, thank you so much for visiting my poem, appreciate !

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/20/2016 12:05:00 AM

You have brought tears to my eyes, simple as that

Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2016 7:34:00 AM

Arthur, I will forever grieve, it is endless that pain in my heart, thank you for your compassion ~

Justin Bordner

Date: 1/19/2016 8:49:00 PM

A thousand goodbyes is worth a single heartbeat of love my Wings of Fire...J.A.B.

Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2016 7:35:00 AM

Justin, thank you so much for that lovely poetic comment, thank you so much ~

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 1/19/2016 1:00:00 PM

A touching and moving write BW, so sorry for the pain you endure daily, know he is waiting with open arms and continues to be your guardian angel. Hugs

Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2016 7:36:00 AM

Cecilia, this is my believe, also, he is my guardian angel (I have a few, lol!) thank you so much for your lovely comment ~

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/18/2016 5:07:00 PM

You have a heart of silver, gold, platinum and sheer tenderness. I am so sorry for the loss you feel. We all wish it could be made better, but alas there is no quick nor any easy remedy.

Constance La France
Date: 1/18/2016 6:38:00 PM

Duke, thanks for visiting my poetry and your compassion, appreciate ~

James Inman

Date: 1/18/2016 2:55:00 PM

Will the longing every abate. There is always so much you wanted to say and impossible to alleviate the feeling that you will never speak to them again. Hold to your beliefs it's the source of strength.

Constance La France
Date: 1/18/2016 3:05:00 PM

James, thanks for visiting my poem today and for the nice comment, appreciate

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/18/2016 10:49:00 AM

BW, you have penned a sad tanka yet the reader could sense the deep love within this well written piece. Great job! Good luck in the contest-Alexis 7

Constance La France
Date: 1/18/2016 12:49:00 PM

Alexis, thanks for the compliment and the visit

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/18/2016 7:52:00 AM

it's hard to say goodbye....sometimes we even have to cry....it is just so hard to let go....simply because we never know....if our eyes will ever again touch the face....of those with our Love, every single trace....very compelling bw....;)

Constance La France
Date: 1/18/2016 8:08:00 AM

Eric, thanks for visiting with that poetic and lovely comment, appreciate ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2016 6:23:00 PM

so beautiful, so sad!

Constance La France
Date: 1/18/2016 6:39:00 AM

Andrea, thanks for the visit, yes beautifully sad, there is no end to this grief