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I Just Went

When I was young I'd drink all day. Till I was drunk and swing and sway. But then time came to pay the bill. And I woke up a little ill. My belly grew and almost popped. Then I knew this must be stopped. My hair fell out and I got gout. I finally learned what it's about. The damage done, nowhere to run. My hay day's gone, now no more fun. My bladders fried and totally spent. I always feel like I just went. Just one beer, oh my, oh dear. And now I have to go I fear. I've taken pills to ease my ills. It's this kind of thinking that usually kills. Maybe someday I'll live and learn. If you play with fire, you will burn. But I'd like to know just what it meant. For I still feel like I just went.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/13/2015 8:20:00 AM
Youth is a gift easily squandered chasing dreams, while old age is an awakening from dreams to confront reality. Well written. Emile.
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Date: 3/9/2015 1:53:00 PM
I found humor in this and still realize how real this state of being can be. Well presented, I'd say !!
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Date: 3/8/2015 3:51:00 PM
Can't believe you had yet another one up that I had not seen. you are really going to town with some good ones.
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Date: 3/8/2015 3:50:00 PM
oh my, what a sorry state to be in. I think we all have our little ills, but that one sounds horrid to me. I have a small bladder and I DO know the feeling having to get out of bed constantly at night to pee. Uggggg. I hate it!!
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Date: 2/27/2015 6:36:00 PM
ha! i guess we can't do half the things we used to be able to do when we were younger. you've said that very well in this poem, robert!
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Date: 2/27/2015 12:13:00 PM
The author humorously portrays a recovering alcoholic that has now lost everything important in his life including his health. Emile #7
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