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(Rhyme) I look at you and I want you more You are the only one that I adore And when I happen to be with you You help me see everything brand-new. All things may come and just go But your love is something that in me grows. You have a way to touch my very heart And know love like this can never part. Your lips are like sweetest honey in my core And when I kiss them just want more and more You open to me wide your yearning arms And then again I am surrounded to your charms. Your love is like a drug that heals my wound And I am so happy that you're with me around I feel your love and I also caress your face And I just want you more,your love can't ever erase. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,18,2014

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Date: 11/19/2014 3:36:00 PM
You can caress my face any time you want sweet Dorian! What a romantic you are... you curl my toes! Love and kisses and love and kisses and... XXXXXX
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/19/2014 11:16:00 PM
Thank you so much Jack! God bless you! :) xxxx D.
Date: 11/19/2014 7:26:00 AM
"D" OK -- I'm totally transfixed here with your romantic write!! I really like the verse: "Your love is like a drug that heals my wound." I think everyone needs more of this type of drug!! Another FAV and my earnest entreaty to you to keep writing always!! Best Wishes and Spill Ink!! Gary
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/19/2014 11:17:00 PM
My dear friend Gary, thank you so kindly for dropping by! :)xxxxx D.
Date: 11/18/2014 11:36:00 AM
stunning romantic write Dorian:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/19/2014 11:15:00 PM
Thank you Jan! :) xxxx D.
Date: 11/18/2014 7:26:00 AM
A romantic treat.
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/19/2014 11:14:00 PM
Thank you Richard! :) D.

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