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I Just Can'T Win

I try repeatedly but i can't win her heart Each attempt left falling in the dark I try over and over but I'm slowly running out lives As if I'm fighting a knight with a small, dull knife I change my technique almost every day Trying to win your heart in many different ways But in your heart i just can't be I don't seem to have the skills to compete Through many sleepless nights i continue to play In constant hope for victory one day My eyes set on the glorious prize To kiss my queen, and claim her as mine I lay in bed and continue to think Eyes watery so I'm scared to blink My mind struggles to comprehend The reason why I Just Can't Win

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/14/2012 1:33:00 AM
William stepping back might just do the trick, good luck..David
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