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I Just

A lifeless body A hollow shell of what once was She once spoke with passion Laughed at a simple joke She loved fiercely An unconditional love She was so happy Shone brightly from the inside out But then it all changed She spoke scarcely They saw sadness in her eyes Eyes that shimmered with unshed tears What had happened to this girl Why had she lost her shine Now she lays motionless on the ground The blood pools under her She's curled up As if to ward off cold Written on the wall are bright red letters "I just wanted some one to care"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/2/2014 12:00:00 AM
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Date: 12/1/2014 11:59:00 PM
WOW..Added to my fav poem list. I rate it highest a 7 i guess... And I just would like to say what an expressive beautifully tragic poem..I love it~Joel
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:09:00 AM
The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Nicole. Love, Carol
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