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I Imagine

I imagine a universe without god What a powerful man ! I imagine a world without man What a lovely place ! I imagine a country without politicians What a peaceful land ! I imagine daily trade without businessmen What a simple life ! I imagine a way of life without machines What a romantic life ! I imagine a day without women What a quiet day of rest ! But when I imagine my own self without you Who I am then …

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Diane Christian

Date: 3/22/2009 11:12:00 AM

what a lovley poem, I imaging the day Jesus returns then all the things you write will be true,a world of peace and harmony and pure bliss, Paradise, and one of my fave worship songs is called I can only imagine, when Jesus comes back WOW what a beautiful place it will be, I love the last two line because i would be nothing with out God. God Bless you from diane

Sue Mason

Date: 3/18/2009 10:38:00 AM

Interesting write here, Tavip and I too often think I was born into the wrong generation and would have liked to have lived when the world was simpler ... like maybe with the hunter/gatherers ... LOL ... Welcome to PoetrySoup and I look forward to much more writing from you!!

James Faulkner

Date: 3/17/2009 9:22:00 PM

this peace had made me lol from the opening laugh. really cool piece. (probably didnt get alot of comments and its credit for the first line. lol alot of fundamentalist here at the soup but all is well. great write) lol THE IMAGINATION MUST NOT BE TAMED