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I Hope You Will

Gone, will you miss That so special kiss Words for your ear That heartfelt tear Will memory retain Or with time wane Will nights be cold Of dreams yet untold The bed a lonely place Will you miss that face Miss those gazing eyes Cry those empty skies Miss the sweet caress Of lips first tenderness Reflect and linger on Of me when I'm gone A question we all ponder In quiet times we wonder Will you remember me In fondness of memory

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Date: 3/13/2010 7:34:00 AM
The simplest truths.......so pure! Jeralynn
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Date: 3/4/2010 11:53:00 AM
I love the heart felt words put to paper in this one.
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Date: 3/3/2010 10:19:00 AM
Good question that you present to us today. We would all like to remember in a good way or is that true??Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/2/2010 12:24:00 PM
I love this one! Sad and beautiful =) -Echo
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Date: 3/1/2010 5:41:00 AM
Thankxxx so much for your blog comment Daniel.. am posting another blog later today if u want to check it out.. appreciate your input and hopefully the Soup Management has completed their maintenance.. that was the problem.. have a happy Monday.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:07:00 AM
so touching!
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Date: 2/28/2010 9:27:00 PM
I'm sure she will! Well done!
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Date: 2/27/2010 8:59:00 PM
Many questions ,Hope she is lucky enough to read this beauty and give you an answer..i think she will remember you..and these beautiful verses full of love ,tnks for your support on my poetry..your friend Charma
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Date: 2/27/2010 6:56:00 PM
A lovely elegant write from u Daniel tonight.. such captivating words and a question to ponder.. thankxx for sharing ..enjoyed.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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