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450 LOVE OF GRANDKIDS ideas | grandparents quotes, grandma quotes, grandkids

My grandma and a rose are the same, each is God's masterpiece but with a different name." _by Constance __________________ My grandma took this broken child, she held me to her heart; and through my weeping tears I smiled, when she called me sweetheart. Grandma was a storyteller, I would sit on her lap; often, she was a taleteller, and after I would clap. And she encouraged me to write, she gave me a journal; I wrote my sadness and my fright, things I kept internal. I recall my sweet attic room, on my grandparents farm; and with love I began to bloom, I recall her sweet charm. With her love I was given wings, as I grew we were close; with my grandma I shared all things, till age problems arose. In a nursing home she waited, I would go to see her; she told me her life was fated, soon her words were a blur. I was there the day she left me, and I held her to my heart; I am now a writer would be, because of that sweetheart. ______________________ August 29, 2021 Poetry/Quatrain/I Held Her To My Heart Copyright Protected, ID 08-1385-198-29 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, The One Who Touched My Heart sponsor, Regina McIntosh, Judged 09/14/2021 Third Place Submitted to the Standard contest, A Strand (1063) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 02/01/2022 First Place

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Date: 2/1/2022 9:03:00 PM
A fave!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2022 7:46:00 AM
Seeker, the ultimate compliment, thank you so much ~ Constance
Date: 2/1/2022 8:07:00 PM
Great memory of grandma. Sentiments beautifully expressed. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/2/2022 7:47:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, never be afraid to express your pain ~Constance
Date: 9/21/2021 2:08:00 PM
Constance - this is a beautiful poem about your grandma - I am so glad that she gave you wings. She must have been an amazing, loving and supportive woman- Congrats on your win David
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Date: 9/21/2021 5:38:00 PM
David, thank you so much for the congrats and the nice comment, my grandma was an amazing lady ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/15/2021 1:04:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this tribute poem to your Grandma. I rejoice with you for having been blessed by the Lord with a treasure like her. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/15/2021 9:45:00 AM
Beata, thank you for the compliment and congrats, you are very welcome on your win/wins ~love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/14/2021 7:49:00 AM
So beautiful Constance, love the love between you and your grandma who gave her heart to yours. Congratulations on the win in Regina’s contest… Belle
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Date: 9/14/2021 2:41:00 PM
Belle, thank you for the compliment and for the congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 9/14/2021 4:49:00 AM
A beautiful poem on your Grandma. I like very specially the last four lines. You have a beautiful way of writing your pains. Your words flow fluently. Hereby, I would like to thank you for the opportunities you have been giving me to take part in your contest. I feel very bad about the ones I missed. I enjoy participating in them. Thank you very much.
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Date: 9/14/2021 5:27:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment on my poem and for your wonderful comment and compliment about my contests, so happy you are enjoying them ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Date: 9/14/2021 4:40:00 AM
So beautiful... you never fail to impress me with your talent, sweet friend. Congrats and God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 9/14/2021 5:25:00 AM
Gina, thank you for the contest and the wonderful theme and my great placement. And for the compliment on the poem and my writing and the congrats ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/31/2021 11:19:00 AM
Awe this is a very beautiful tribute to your grandma. I love the clever rhymes "journal" and "internal" for instance. Pure genius! Very moving and very lovely.
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Date: 9/1/2021 3:14:00 PM
Natasha, thank you for the compliment and comment on my poem ~ love and serenity _Constance
Date: 8/29/2021 7:13:00 AM
Hello constance, this is a beautiful poem. Love & Friendship Darlene.
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Date: 8/29/2021 3:39:00 PM
Hello Constance, yes it will be nice. Love & serenity Darlene
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Constance La France
Date: 8/29/2021 12:46:00 PM
Darlene, thanks for visiting, and for the compliment, I am just beginning it but I think it will be nice ~ love and serenity _Constance

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